I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka rawe, great work sharing your book review Neha. I like how you have included a brief summary and your opinion, with examples from the book. Fffzzzzzzsssh is a fun use of onomatopoeia! What action was it depicting?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Ka rawe, great work sharing your book review Neha. I like how you have included a brief summary and your opinion, with examples from the book. Fffzzzzzzsssh is a fun use of onomatopoeia! What action was it depicting?
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