I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Talofa lava Neha this is Victoria and Viena, we really liked your picture collage on heores great work but we have one question for you who inspires you the most?
Hi Victoria and Viena this is Neha and thank you for your comment. The person who inspires me the most is Kate Sheppard because she helped the womans and stood up for women's rights.
Hi Olivia this is Neha and thank you for your comment. The person who inspires me the most is Kate Sheppard because she helped the womans and stood up for women's rights.
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Talofa lava Neha this is Victoria and Viena, we really liked your picture collage on heores great work but we have one question for you who inspires you the most?
ReplyDeleteHi Victoria and Viena this is Neha and thank you for your comment. The person who inspires me the most is Kate Sheppard because she helped the womans and stood up for women's rights.
DeleteHi Neha, Olivia here from Otaki college. I like your picture collage of heros. They are very awesome people. Who inspires you?
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia this is Neha and thank you for your comment. The person who inspires me the most is Kate Sheppard because she helped the womans and stood up for women's rights.
DeleteHi Neha, it is 'Ana I love your picture collage but it would be nice if you rote what they did to be a hero.
ReplyDeleteHi Ana this is Neha and thank you for your comment and a picture collage is just pictures.
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