I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Neha, I have looked at your poster on friendship and it was very interesting, I loved the way you said " You should consider caring for other people " I have a question for you, Have you ever been in a long friendship before?
Kia ora Neha, the positivity that you brought into our poster was great like those to people you made and at first when I was working you I didnt know what you were making because it looked like ghost's.
Kia Ora Neha,I really liked your poster on caring this is very inspiring. I also liked the text you added to your work it taught me why caring is important. Keep up the amazing work.
Hey Neha this is Tevita, This post is really good and nice looking because it brings out how to be kind and it even shows those two girls that one is getting bullied and the other one is laughing.
Kia Ora Neha, I love your poster on caring I really like the background. I love that your work is interesting. have you been in a long friendship before? Ana
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Kia ora Neha,
ReplyDeleteI have looked at your poster on friendship and it was very interesting,
I loved the way you said " You should consider caring for other people "
I have a question for you,
Have you ever been in a long friendship before?
Kia ora Neha, the positivity that you brought into our poster was great like those to people you made and at first when I was working you I didnt know what you were making because it looked like ghost's.
ReplyDeleteHI Neha I really liked looking and reading your poster on caring because it tells so much how to be kind and caring. :)
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Neha,I really liked your poster on caring this is very inspiring. I also liked the text you added to your work it taught me why caring is important. Keep up the amazing work.
ReplyDeleteHey Neha this is Tevita, This post is really good and nice looking because it brings out how to be kind and it even shows those two girls that one is getting bullied and the other one is laughing.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Neha,
ReplyDeleteI love your poster on caring,I love the background.your work is interesting and amazing.
Luisapeta
Kia Ora Neha and Karson, I really
ReplyDeletelike your poster
on kindness and I
like the person you drawed
and your background.
Keep it up! :)
Kia Ora Neha,
ReplyDeleteI love your poster on caring I really like the background. I love that your work is interesting. have you been in a long friendship before?
Ana