I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Mīharo, this is an AMAZING book Neha. I love how you have illustrated the cover yourself and included a blurb on the back. I also really enjoyed the way you made a non-fiction book more fun for your audience by writing it from the point of view of a kiwi. What was the most interesting thing you learned about kiwi when writing this book?
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Mīharo, this is an AMAZING book Neha. I love how you have illustrated the cover yourself and included a blurb on the back. I also really enjoyed the way you made a non-fiction book more fun for your audience by writing it from the point of view of a kiwi. What was the most interesting thing you learned about kiwi when writing this book?
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