We are learning to analyse texts and look at how authors create mood and atmosphere by using language features. Here is a screencast I created with Patrick of our analysis of the text The Promise.
I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
kia Ora Neha this is Victoria,
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful text analyes on the promise honstely the only thing I can say is that this is amazing I liked how you added your screencasify it was amazing and clear.
well done
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hello Neha it is us Mahana and Hesioni we really liked your text analysis its amazing there is so much fact and we know you and your buddy Patrick have been working hard.
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Hi Neha,
ReplyDeleteThis is Ana I really enjoyed your text analysis it was amazing. You and your buddy have worked so hard. great job on your screencasify. Make sure to keep up the good work.
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