I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Your poster is super cool, you've recreated the cover and the art style nicely and your pie looks a lot nicer to eat too. I'd love to know what the book is about, I only googled the title to see what the cover was like. Keep on posting. See you in the comments.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Nehan,
ReplyDeleteYour poster is super cool, you've recreated the cover and the art style nicely and your pie looks a lot nicer to eat too. I'd love to know what the book is about, I only googled the title to see what the cover was like. Keep on posting. See you in the comments.
Daniel :)