I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello i am Adolf Kasson i really like your work on your descrtive writing i like when you talk about how it feels and how it smells like next time can you add more writing and can you put where you founded the writing thank you. please try and add more
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Hello i am Adolf Kasson i really like your work on your descrtive writing i like when you talk about how it feels and how it smells like next time can you add more writing and can you put where you founded the writing thank you. please try and add more
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