I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora bloggers in my class we are learning about mood and atmosphere through writing. I wrote this story with my buddy Kaiva. Keep blogging bloggers.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Neha,
ReplyDeletegreat job on your story you did an amazing job.
I really liked the ending.
By:Ana