I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Neha, What a well written argument. You guys need to add a little bit more detail on your final slide. Say why people hold the opinion they hold regarding heroes are ordinary people. Keep up the awesome learning.
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Hi Neha,
ReplyDeleteWhat a well written argument. You guys need to add a little bit more detail on your final slide. Say why people hold the opinion they hold regarding heroes are ordinary people. Keep up the awesome learning.
Hi Manpreet this is Neha and thank you for your comment and thank you for the tips for my writing.
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ReplyDeletethanks for including me. It was nice working with you. great job on the google slides.
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Hi Ana this is Neha and thank you for your comment.
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