I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Neha, Great job but make sure to check your writing before you publish it on your blog so that it always makes sense. I love the background on your three qualities of you. I think you should write some more stuff than just writing tasks. Ana
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Neha,
ReplyDeleteGreat job but make sure to check your writing before you publish it on your blog so that it always makes sense. I love the background on your three qualities of you.
I think you should write some more stuff than just writing tasks.
Ana