I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Neha, Good on you for working from your create page of the Matariki learning site. Could you try and make your animation more about Matariki and a bit short as well. Try for about 50 slides. Do more captions and tell a story through animation. If you need to ask me anything, please email me and I can do a video chat with you through Google Hangout. Well done for working in your holidays.
Kia ora Neha, What a wonderful animation that you have created with Victoria and maybe you should tell a story about Matariki if you want.GREAT JOB!! By: SOloia
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Kia ora Neha,
ReplyDeleteGood on you for working from your create page of the Matariki learning site. Could you try and make your animation more about Matariki and a bit short as well. Try for about 50 slides. Do more captions and tell a story through animation. If you need to ask me anything, please email me and I can do a video chat with you through Google Hangout. Well done for working in your holidays.
Kia ora Neha,
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful animation that you have created with Victoria and maybe you should tell a story about Matariki if you want.GREAT JOB!!
By: SOloia