I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Neha, Wow! Fantastic work on sharing your ideas for both sides- agree and disagree. You are really getting good and confident at argumentation writing. In life it is important to see things and understand things from your side and as well as the other person's side. It is really good that you are able to show where you got all the information from. Well done. Keep up with the amazing learning Neha. Take care. Ka Pai!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Neha,
ReplyDeleteWow! Fantastic work on sharing your ideas for both sides- agree and disagree. You are really getting good and confident at argumentation writing. In life it is important to see things and understand things from your side and as well as the other person's side.
It is really good that you are able to show where you got all the information from. Well done. Keep up with the amazing learning Neha. Take care. Ka Pai!