I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Neha, This is a clearly presented argument on why or why not you should be staying or not staying at home during lockdown. It's interesting to see the difference in your reasons and others who have done this piece of writing so far. I think your reasons show things that are important to you and your family. It is really special. Ka Pai for awesome writing.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Neha,
ReplyDeleteThis is a clearly presented argument on why or why not you should be staying or not staying at home during lockdown. It's interesting to see the difference in your reasons and others who have done this piece of writing so far. I think your reasons show things that are important to you and your family. It is really special.
Ka Pai for awesome writing.