I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Neha, How nice to see you post your work after a few days. Usually you are posting work almost everyday. Wow! 200 slides! It took me a while to get to the end of your animation but I did. I like the end how the aliens are not successful in their mission to take over the Earth. How long did it take you to complete this animation? Did you find the Google Slides presentation helpful on the fun page? Take care Neha. Ka Pai!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Neha,
ReplyDeleteHow nice to see you post your work after a few days. Usually you are posting work almost everyday.
Wow! 200 slides! It took me a while to get to the end of your animation but I did. I like the end how the aliens are not successful in their mission to take over the Earth. How long did it take you to complete this animation? Did you find the Google Slides presentation helpful on the fun page?
Take care Neha.
Ka Pai!