I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I’m Daniel from the SLJ Blog commenting team. I’m looking forward to seeing all your amazing blog posts and I hope you’re enjoying your summer.
Your kowhaiwhai pattern design looks really cool, it almost looks like a smiling mouth to me. Great job especially for your first time. I’d love to hear more of your thinking, what parts of it represent parts of nature to you? What’s your favourite part of it?
Hello Neha, Your drawing lookes really cool. I hope you make more of them because they are really cool! Maybe next time you could add some colour into it?
See ya later! Amelia. https://marameliao.blogspot.com/
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Hey Neha,
ReplyDeleteI’m Daniel from the SLJ Blog commenting team. I’m looking forward to seeing all your amazing blog posts and I hope you’re enjoying your summer.
Your kowhaiwhai pattern design looks really cool, it almost looks like a smiling mouth to me. Great job especially for your first time. I’d love to hear more of your thinking, what parts of it represent parts of nature to you? What’s your favourite part of it?
Nice work Neha,
See you later in the comments.
Daniel
Hello Neha,
ReplyDeleteYour drawing lookes really cool. I hope you make more of them because they are really cool! Maybe next time you could add some colour into it?
See ya later!
Amelia. https://marameliao.blogspot.com/
Hi Neha what an amazing first go you’ve had at drawing a kowhaiwhai. Well done!
ReplyDeletePlease remember to reply to everyone who comments on your blog posts. Thanks Neha.
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