I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thank you for sharing your narrative podcast! Next time it would be great if you could add some text to your blog post explaining what the work is that you are sharing. I really enjoyed listening to your story, especially the dialogue and simile you included. Ka pai!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Neha
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your narrative podcast! Next time it would be great if you could add some text to your blog post explaining what the work is that you are sharing. I really enjoyed listening to your story, especially the dialogue and simile you included. Ka pai!