I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora neha it is Victoria, what a wonderful work you have done on Mood and Atmosphere and also what wonderful paragraphs you have created. I love you work because your paragraphs made me feel like I was in the movies with you.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora neha it is Victoria, what a wonderful work you have done on Mood and Atmosphere and also what wonderful paragraphs you have created. I love you work because your paragraphs made me feel like I was in the movies with you.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Neha, great job on your creating atmosphere I really love the background and I really like your paragraphs you did.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the work.
By:Ana