I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, 30 October 2020
Friday, 23 October 2020
Wednesday, 21 October 2020
Creative Story
Horrified and scared
Ghosts
Cemetery
Blood
12:00am Midnight
Black grey and red
Dark gloomy raining night
Slowly
It was a dark and gloomy night. When we walked slowly to the cemetery. It was cold while it rained at midnight. There was blood everywhere. There was a knife beside Tiannah’s leg. When we saw the knife we screamed so loud that we woke up all the ghosts in that cemetery.
All the ghosts chased us until we were surrounded. We had nowhere to go but just then we realised they were ghosts and we could just walk through them. We were wrong, these were magical ghosts we could not walk through them. The ghosts watched us in their arms. We were never heard from again.
Jasmine , Tiannah and Neha
Tuesday, 20 October 2020
Thursday, 15 October 2020
Creating Mood and Atmosphere In Writing