I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Neha, You and Victoria have done an excellent job at putting all your ideas in paragraphs correctly in your argumentation writing. Well done. Neha you are such a good learning buddy to all you work with. Thank you for your kindness and leadership role you take on so well.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Neha,
ReplyDeleteYou and Victoria have done an excellent job at putting all your ideas in paragraphs correctly in your argumentation writing. Well done. Neha you are such a good learning buddy to all you work with. Thank you for your kindness and leadership role you take on so well.