I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Neha, What a well written opinion and the reasons you have stated are things many people would agree with. We as a country have done really well so far in fighting against the Coronavirus and if had not gone in lockdown when we did , things could have been a lot worse for us. I agree with you that if we had to go in lockdown and should not be complaining about it as it has helped to control the Coronavirus from spreading. Great job at making a start at writing in paragraphs. From next week, we will work on writing in paragraphs properly and not number them. This was just a practice week for you guys. Ka Pai.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Neha,
ReplyDeleteWhat a well written opinion and the reasons you have stated are things many people would agree with. We as a country have done really well so far in fighting against the Coronavirus and if had not gone in lockdown when we did , things could have been a lot worse for us.
I agree with you that if we had to go in lockdown and should not be complaining about it as it has helped to control the Coronavirus from spreading.
Great job at making a start at writing in paragraphs. From next week, we will work on writing in paragraphs properly and not number them. This was just a practice week for you guys.
Ka Pai.